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In the Rainbow factory by dragonsweater

:iconcl4u5:
This is actually pretty cool, but a few things are wrong. The cutie mark colors (on the rainbow bolt thingie) Are supposed to be red, yellow, and blue. And the cloud also looks a little too puffy looking. Also the eye color looks a little too dark. It looks a little bit more like a red color. And the colors on her tail don't look very lined up. And I think the orange color looks a little bit too much of a brown. But you did get some of the colors right. And I love how the background looks, and the fact that you added the scar on her face.
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:icondragonsweater:
dragonsweater Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you for the Critique ;w; Her eyes were suposed to be red, Since they were like that in the story. Also putting rainbows on tails like how rainbow dash's is kinda hard. ^^; I can't fix it either.
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:iconcl4u5:
CL4U5 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist
That's ok. I still think you did a good job. ^^
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:icondragonsweater:
dragonsweater Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks so much ;u;
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